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Alois playing the piano as a a present for Ciel's birthday.

I came up with this idea after I watched a Cosplay video of Alois playing the piano with Ciel laying on top of the instrument (www.youtube.com/watch?v=5UsdteHTwhU&feature=related). I got so excited about the idea that I decided to draw it.
It is my second entry for the Kuro Birthday contest. I really wanted to draw something for Ciel too, so I made this. ^^'

For his 10th birthday, Ciel got his manor burned, his parents killed and himself sold to a group of fanatics. Since then, he decided not to celebrate it anymore.
On this drawing, Alois wants to offer something to Ciel, but as he knows he doesn't like to celebrate it, he just plays the piano without telling him it's his birthday present. Even if he keeps on a marble face, Ciel gets pretty affected by the music. He can feel all the kindness and love of Alois. Because yeah, I think that deep down, Alois is a very kind person, especially when it comes to someone he loves. I think of the melody he is playing as someting very sweet and melancholic. Something like Beethoven's famous "Für Elise". I've been repeting it over and over when I was drawing soo~ it's the first thing that comes to my mind.
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Anyway, I had a VERY VERY hard time drawing the piano. Urghhh !!! It was the first time for me to draw one so I was searching for models all over the internet. In the end I'm pretty satisfied with how it came, even if I know there are some mistakes... but hey, I've never draw a piano in my entire life é~è !!! And for Ciel's face, after I got the drawing scanned and everything, I just realised there was something weird... so I redid it again and again. Urghhhh~ I thought I would never finish it !!
In the whole, what I love the most is the piano, Alois (especially his hand) and Ciel's hair, eye and lips. When I put it like that, it seems that I love everything about this drawing but it's wrong. I see there are lots of things unpleasing me but I can't really identify them. So if you have a little advice or something : just tell me, pleaaaaase~, I need to correct it. >__<

Kuroshitsuji is Yana Toboso and Square Nix's proprety.
Drawn with a pencil.
Drawing : 6 hours
Colouring and effects : more than 7/8 hours (with The Gimp and Photofiltre)